EternalSunset0
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I'd say that the existing reviews for the first volume on the site are on point.
As is this one when I asked someone to read it over at Discord
Stuff like grammar (tenses) and prose need a LOT of work, but they're understandable enough that they don't completely detract from the story. They just tend to not be concise enough, and I'm terrible at word choice.
Characters aren't too unqiue, but they have decent enough background and have some minor quirks that differentiate them a bit from their base archetypes. A bit more depth than your usual throwaway LN characters but not too much.
However, the strong points basically boil down to me knowing what I want to make and managing to bring it out. The feedback I have typically alluded to "how similar to an LN" it is or how reading it feels like "watching an anime but with words", and it has been compared to translations of existing LNs, so on that aapect, it's a big success.
Nothing too special. Nothing too unique. If turned into an anime, probably gonna end up as random 2-cour seasonal filler (and possibly a second 2-cour season to finish the whole plot) while racking in those 6.5 to 7.5 out of 10 scores in sites. End up with a small but loyal fanbase and some merch and lewds of the girls. Exactly how I wanted it to be.
As is this one when I asked someone to read it over at Discord
Stuff like grammar (tenses) and prose need a LOT of work, but they're understandable enough that they don't completely detract from the story. They just tend to not be concise enough, and I'm terrible at word choice.
Characters aren't too unqiue, but they have decent enough background and have some minor quirks that differentiate them a bit from their base archetypes. A bit more depth than your usual throwaway LN characters but not too much.
However, the strong points basically boil down to me knowing what I want to make and managing to bring it out. The feedback I have typically alluded to "how similar to an LN" it is or how reading it feels like "watching an anime but with words", and it has been compared to translations of existing LNs, so on that aapect, it's a big success.
Nothing too special. Nothing too unique. If turned into an anime, probably gonna end up as random 2-cour seasonal filler (and possibly a second 2-cour season to finish the whole plot) while racking in those 6.5 to 7.5 out of 10 scores in sites. End up with a small but loyal fanbase and some merch and lewds of the girls. Exactly how I wanted it to be.
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