Hathnuz
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Welp, sorry for the late reply. I've been busy lately.
By the way, you don't have to add action or dialogue tag every single time a character is speaking. It's fine to not add anything once in every a while.
Even though the premise is fine as it is, it seems you have rewritten and reposted your story, and that will affect your readership (I've experienced it before). Reincarnation alone won't carry your story, so it might take a long time and enormous effort to reach high numbers. It's possible but very unlikely, especially due to the rewrite.
Overall, I don't think it will become popular anytime soon and as always, take my words with grain of salt.
Yeah, you just struck gold and nailed everything what makes stories popular in scribblehub with that story. Other than it's tad bit cliched (but good cliche), I have nothing to criticize, so instead, I'll just give you an advice: don't go for netorare no matter what. Overall, 600-800 readers by chapter 30. Might even be able to reach 1,500+ in no time.Chapter 1
It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge
Synopsis
I have a brother who's a bonafide Otaku. One time, he introduced me to this game called 'Spirit Infinite'. An Eroge bishoujo game is particularly popular among young lads. Its popularity stems from 15 beautiful heroines.
The game's story revolves around the protagonist named Shin Morino, an idealist of justice and peace. On top of that, a cheat protagonist whose main goal is to stop the world's destruction, but while at it, conquer girls along the way.
Then I, Fukushima Aki, a young adult who died at the age of 19 from a terminal illness. Living in the hospital, nearly my entire teenage life, shackled unto my bed, but that all changed when I died. I was granted a second chance to live a new life. However, that second chance was to live in the world of Spirit Infinite, the same game that my brother introduced to me.
What's more, I'm not even the protagonist but a nobody... With a handsome face? Who am I?
Nonetheless, with this second chance, I will live my life to the fullest!
Genre
ActionAdultComedyEcchiFantasyHaremIsekaiRomanceSchool Life
Tags
Academy BDSM Beastkin Demons Dragons Elves First-time Intercourse Handsome Male Lead Love Interest Falls in Love First Magic Magic Beasts Male Protagonist Monster Girls Mythical Beasts Netori Nudity Obsessive Love Polygamy R-18 Reincarnated into Another World Succubus Sword And Magic Transmigration Transported into a Game World Yandere
Hmm, interesting. It's been a while since I read this kind of story. Too bad webnovel readers prefer xianxia more than wuxia. Moreover, dark stories tend to be less received compared to lighter ones. The title is also very bland. Overall, less than 100 readers by chapter 30.I've been working on a new little something called Heaven and Earth (A reference to the Heaven and Earth Society which was the precursor to the Chinese Triads). It's a Wuxia historical dark fantasy action series with psychological and horror elements set vaguely in 1800's Qing China and follows a Shaolin monk that's been trained to fight and kill demons and fallen gods. The protagonist is the only survivor of a massacre caused by his master as part of a sacrifice so he could take the shortcut to becoming a Taoist immortal. the protagonist manages to escape, but he's followed by a sort of metaphysical mark on his soul that makes demons more powerful when near him. The story follows him as he tries to figure out what to do with his life as revenge seems increasingly distant, though he still has yet to let go of a lot of hatred.
I plan on having the story explore dark themes like healing through trauma, holes in Chinese cultural values like face, ethnic divisions in east and central Asia, imperialism, etc. But I also wanna just show off cool shit from Chinese philosophy and religion. Currently I only have one chapter out, but I have a backlog I'm working on.
First chapter: Heaven and Earth
By the way, you don't have to add action or dialogue tag every single time a character is speaking. It's fine to not add anything once in every a while.
If you insist.Synopsis:
He was born in a dark world - a world where souls were traded like coins, and a person’s life wouldn’t amount to much. A demon who'd been born on the battlefield and survived decades there. A demon who began from the bottom of the hierarchy and gradually ascended to the top.
His name was Leraje. Leraje eventually met his death in the hands of the Demon Lords after years of living and battling on the battlefield. At that time, he believed it was the end. But the world had other plans for him. Within the darkness full of despair, the demon finally awakens, only to discover he was reborn as a human!
Waking up to be faced with a string of mysteries, Leraje finds himself reborn as Seth Darkmore, where he sees a world filled with magic, artifacts, guilds, empires, and otherworldly planes. Follow Seth as he explores the hidden organizations, lost realms, sweeping across worlds, vying to become a supreme existence!
Chapter 1: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/262641-lord-of-the-magus-world/chapter/277807/
Hi, i know am past 30 chapters but I would really like a prediction. please? you can just say whether it will become popular or not. Don't hold back!
Even though the premise is fine as it is, it seems you have rewritten and reposted your story, and that will affect your readership (I've experienced it before). Reincarnation alone won't carry your story, so it might take a long time and enormous effort to reach high numbers. It's possible but very unlikely, especially due to the rewrite.
Overall, I don't think it will become popular anytime soon and as always, take my words with grain of salt.