TheMonotonePuppet
A Writer With Enthusiasm & A Jester of Christmas!
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The vibes are fine!Updates, updates, updates
With the new pose, I got to play around with the outfit more. I have managed to make Sol look like well… they’ve got mean girl energy now. Good or bad??? Not sure. Please let me know if the vibes are off.
added touches: one leg is bent the wrong way. Missing arm accounted for
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Added makeup as well, I think it ties the look together. Working on lengthening the face a bit for a more accurate and androgynous appearance
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I realize this is a complete outfit redesign, so I’ll wait for approval before continuing. It does, however, also follow the spirit of the text. Inspiration: historical stays and bloomers
I really liked the idea of historical stays as they are completely flat chested and emphasize the natural waist more than the regency empire waist I previously used
I was looking to add hair down to about hip/glute length, although that may just be my personal desire for ever longer hair on characters, let me know
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This is a fan art illustration for Charisma, @TheMonotonePuppet’s novel
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And I do enjoy the closer-to-text design… hmmm... I think I love the redesign!
And for the parts of the hair that have not been done yet, to match with the pose and background scenery, could it please be blowing to the viewer’s left, or Sol’s right?
I can’t remember whether you already had that part, but I like that the red ribbon ties up the sleeve over the limb remnant.
One thing I noted is that the tongue gets kind of lost when looked at from a distance. Maybe it’s the thinness and lack of… weight?… I don’t know. Up close it never stood out to me, just something that stood out from a distance. It isn’t something that is too important to me though. Clothing and hair are more important due to standing out more to the viewer.
By the way, I am pretty tired today, so having difficulties making choices! And I am sounding much less enthusiastic than I actually am. This is fun.