Sylver
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They are both the protagonists, the story focuses on both as they each have a strong role to play. The first act has both of them play a balanced role in a sort of slice of life mixed with a bit of adventure as new events begin to unfold. I can't share much further without adding spoilers, but is it so uncommon for a novel to have two main protagonists?In conclusion, I think you should change the synopsis a bit to center around the nekomata if she is the protagonist, and maybe adjust your tags a bit so people would know exactly what they're getting.
On a side note, how on Earth do you have the time and effort to write so many chapters in such a short amount of time!?
Were it so easyI demand you reject your intrusive thoughts.
I had the GL tag removed but kept the GL subplot tag in, and I am hoping people are patient with me for that the GL subplot is introduced in the second act and currently the story is nearing the end of its first act. The GL subplot remains a central subplot throughout the story, it has plenty of development and focus! The issue is that it's not in the first act, so again I hope reader's are patient with me for that. Someone commented in one chapter about that and I offered the same explanation, it plays a role in the story just not yet.I think girl's love stories are popular on here, so there's nothing wrong with adding the girl's love subplot tag in your story if it has that element.
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