I made a third attempt on making story and some of the readers and a author helped me out.
But am wondering what should i do in the story to make more interesting.
Here are my most common requests.
A. Filler
B: More details about the world
C: Making more of a backstory of the story
D: Slowed down pace
Which is the best way to do this?
Feel free to tell your own opinion on the matter.
Judging by those details, it sounds like maybe the issue you are having is that you are jumping from A to B.
A story in general should go up a ramp on a climax, then wrap up with an anticlimax. You know like this:
While you don't need to exactly follow that, understand you need to build up hype to get readers interested, and then slowly whittle that hype. I've seen plenty of stories where the author tries to make everything super duper awesome that it becomes stale.
A story isn't just about the ending, but how you get there.
Like imagine your favorite food, now imagine eating only your favorite food for the rest of your life and nothing else. Before you know it, you will get sick of it fast. (It is proven, lobster is often considered a premium food, but back in the day some prisons served nothing but lobster which resulted in prison riots)
Effectively, you can't keep a story at all time highs or it will become stale. So I don't think people are asking for filler per se, what they are asking is that you spend more time building up the climax rather than jumping from A to B. I know it is tempting cause as a reader, you always wish to get to the juicy part as fast as possible. But that is cheap satisfaction. For people to really enjoy a story, you need buildup. Make people crave that B so they can feel satisfaction. Of course don't over-stall either.
World building, details and filler are simply methods of accomplishing that.
Writing a story is like drinking tea with sweats, the bitter tea makes the sweats sweater. If you eat nothing but sweats, at one point your tongue adjust and everything feels bland.
Makes sense?