Scared of his own Shadow's that trying to kill him? Reasonable, so he should be fighting alongside his brother.Wait, is greeny still terrified?! :c Poor baby.
Hm... I guess you could explain it first. Have an exposition of the details and what the device is suppose to do and how it works. You can also add what draw backs it has. Usually anything with magic isn't risk free.@KoyukiMegumi , just wondering.
When you want to introduce a strange invention that is of (magic & sci-fi element) in the writing prompt, how should it be done?
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Hm... I guess you could explain it first. Have an exposition of the details and what the device is suppose to do and how it works. You can also add what draw backs it has. Usually anything with magic isn't risk free.
c: I would need to know more about the device/invention to say more.
Device Name | Aosian Datacase (AD) |
Origins | Aydean, Aosian Tool Collection |
Class | Disaster Lv. 2 |
Inventor | Aos (Non-human) |
Purpose | Record the AD user's information and store that encrypted data into device's banks for later retrieval ( Sounds + colored motion picture ) |
Keys | Soulprint Pad (User Id Check), Hand Crank (Play Cylinder), Pump (Open Projector) |
Energy Source | - Natural ( Moonlight or solar eclipse's black fire) - Magic ( Solar Chaos / Lunar Ether / Aeoncytwi Contract / Star) - Science ( Nuclear Energy ) - - No Electricity / Lightnings ( Require removal of both electrons & neutrons ) |
Materials Used | - Hardened Wood, Petrified Leaves, Dragon Bone, - Uranium superman memory glass marbles (Ice Core Bubbles) - Tungsten Bars, Lodestone Rings, etc. |
Traps for Anti-Theft & Anti-Warfare Research | Radioactive Needles - Human Springlock Electrocution - Shifters, Fae, Energy Drain - Gods, Angel, Demon |
Drawback | - Heavy mana drain = Fatality - Wrong soulprint + impure Intents = Anti-Theft traps - Attempted dissection / disassembly =Anti-Theft traps - Wrong energy source like impure electricity = direct backfire - Radioactive - Meant for Ayde or Special Humans (Kgu) with Star Attribute - Incorrect Disposal =x5 worse than 5 hydrogen bombs - Forced opening / violent extraction - Radioactive explosion |
So, if I am getting this right the AD is like a CD or a storage device that saves data+videos, right? And it looks like those old devices that played those big cds.
Device Name Aosian Datacase (AD) Origins Aydean, Aosian Tool Collection Class Disaster Lv. 2 Inventor Aos (Non-human) Purpose Record the AD user's information and store that encrypted data into device's banks for later retrieval ( Sounds + colored motion picture ) Keys Soulprint Pad (User Id Check), Hand Crank (Play Cylinder),
Pump (Open Projector)Energy Source - Natural ( Moonlight or solar eclipse's black fire)
- Magic ( Solar Chaos / Lunar Ether / Aeoncytwi Contract / Star)
- Science ( Nuclear Energy )
- - No Electricity / Lightnings
( Require removal of both electrons & neutrons )Materials Used - Hardened Wood, Petrified Leaves, Dragon Bone,
- Uranium superman memory glass marbles (Ice Core Bubbles)
- Tungsten Bars, Lodestone Rings, etc.Traps for Anti-Theft & Anti-Warfare Research Radioactive Needles - Human
Springlock Electrocution - Shifters, Fae,
Energy Drain - Gods, Angel, DemonDrawback - Heavy mana drain = Fatality
- Wrong soulprint + impure Intents = Anti-Theft traps
- Attempted dissection / disassembly =Anti-Theft traps
- Wrong energy source like impure electricity = direct backfire
- Radioactive
- Meant for Ayde or Special Humans (Kgu) with Star Attribute
- Incorrect Disposal =x5 worse than 5 hydrogen bombs
- Forced opening / violent extraction - Radioactive explosion
I am getting more confused because when I talked about this AD and explained how it work in hopes of searching for things to improve the AD.
The other people still get confused about the AD's main purpose and origins. They seem to think it's a multipurpose tool.
For example, the device is a primitive in appearance resembling a phonograph (cylinder record), not gramophone (disk record). At the same time, the device operate like a high-tech sci-fi thing with magic as the battery.
The horn of AD is there to transmit soundwaves in and out to and from cylinder record. But the AD's main purpose is to store data. The traps are only the device's self defense mechanism.
No build a treasure chest with booby trapping it.
There's this one guy who keep insisting on using modern human technology logics like electricity or lightning stones as the energy source. But I have explained that the device is unable to use electricity. Why is he so insistent on electricity and less magic use?
You are totally correct!So, if I am getting this right the AD is like a CD or a storage device that saves data+videos, right? And it looks like those old devices that played those big cds.
It's the way of how I have explained the device in another thread - writing prompt. I have to admit that some materials in the beginning need some replacement.If I am right then. Why do people think it's a multipurpose tool? I have 0 idea. It says pretty clearly that it is basically a storage device. That is multipurpose just in fact it is a singular purpose device.
For whatever reasons, that guy sound so bitter or angry like he totally didn't understand anything in the first post nor the title in the first place. Could be my imagination, so I'm ignoring him for now.And the guy wanting to use modern stuff well, I don't understand why other than him wanting it to be more sci-fi than magic?
Well, some peeps are like that. Don't let them get to you. Your device sounds very good. I mean, this is all fantasy-based, even sci-fi elements are fantasy. A little magic here and there isn't bad at all. c:For whatever reasons, that guy sound so bitter or angry like he totally didn't understand anything in the first post nor the title in the first place. Could be my imagination, so I'm ignoring him for now.
Here's the diagram of the AD. A bit messy due to get being drawn in car.Well, some peeps are like that. Don't let them get to you. Your device sounds very good. I mean, this is all fantasy-based, even sci-fi elements are fantasy. A little magic here and there isn't bad at all. c:
Don't worry, just claim this is the dummified version for our plebeian brains to comprehend the beauty of it! Magnificent! Your handwriting isn't bad at all either. xPHere's the diagram of the AF. A bit messy due to get being drawn in car.View attachment 10405
I really do wonder how good your drawings would be :3 if you had a tablet instead of a phone. The all look adorable to me. xD Even the one crying with no eyes xP.View attachment 10417
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Fine. I think the last one is the only best one here.
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So be it. My username on WordPress is Ghostbun and even my Scribblehub user icon is a wolpertinger with a ghostly tail. .....
Your imagination is amazing. Is this device brittle? xP When I see clay I feel like it could break if it falls.Let me introduce to you the first prototype of the Database. That little coyote sucks at names.
This is a live invention crafted by Fangblade Coyote's divine incarnation.
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It was just a ball. No wheels.
The brown parts are stubby legs for docking like pyramid blocks that stop heavy door from closing.
It's carved from bone, made of clay, graphene carbon, Dagmehro's crystallized blood drop, lowest ones, wood, iron, sand, quartzs, and resin.
Evolved from KIBUR which has the ability of shape-shifting from sphere to hexaminx to cube to pyramid to cone or rod.
Shape-shifting ability lost during Evolution (got reassembled).
Rolling flash drive.
But retain energy absorption and data keeping ability.
Solar and lunar rechargeable.
Shoot laser beams. Stun gun defense.
Micmic voices.
Make emoticons in main eye.
Act as spy camera.