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no problem i do appreciate the chance and like i said i understand

is that just more space between conversations? sorry for the newbie question this is my first written story

if any one just finding out gb is gender bender i am sorry for this cursed but helpful knowledge stay informed and stay protected people

i wont say no to more feed back https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1113453-apathy-of-the-universe-a-gods-tale--side-story/chapter/1113457/ first chapter https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1113453-apathy-of-the-universe-a-gods-tale--side-story/chapter/1117633/ second chapter

sounds like to many cooks at face value and not much else to go one i feel like the reincarnator and transmigator would most likely have the most to gain from being "normal" students so that they could better understand why things are the way they are. the regressor may be doing something that...

I would not mind getting more feed back https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1113453-apathy-of-the-universe-a-gods-tale--side-story/chapter/1113457/

I don't think the mc could be all three at once as they are most mutually exclusive that may overlap with much of the same results but the effect is not the same as two deal with fix starting points IE a life experience being born reincarnating while the other regression is going back in time...

hello again sorry if you don't want to reread my post but i did finish my reformatting of chapter one the day after you reviewed me i understand if you don't want to read it again

yea I struggled to even make that opening line haha as I don't really know how to open my stories ever and I really wanted to include the roster cawing for some reason

Oh, I thought it was sufficient to have the link in my signature, but here is the link directly to the chapter https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1113453-apathy-of-the-universe-a-gods-tale--side-story/chapter/1113457/

Hello all I'm back at it again i have reformatted the first chapter of my story please dig in to it and let me know if i did better

Quill bot's AI detector is fairly bad. I asked a bot to summarize my story and just copy-pasted it. It said 100% human-made, and if I added something like Burger King in its own sentence, the whole thing gets flagged as AI-written. lmao

I agree with Hopper. While reading, I thought version one opening line and version two fit pretty well together

Does everyone have max stats, or is it just him if it's just him, have simple skills for him or skills that he has to pay a cost to use, like life, stats, or conditional like its need to via an external influence since he needs to come to depend on friendship eventually maybe its a combo attack...

It's probably just me but I keep getting hung up on this section

I would also like some feedback https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1113453/apathy-of-the-universe-a-gods-tale--side-story/

Thanks for the resource. I'll be sure to read it on my days off and redo my writing, aside from the formatting. How was the rest of it? Did it flow well? Were there any other problems that needed to be fixed?

If you're saying it does, I believe you. How would I fix it? Some of my friends wanted more of a description of the protag and family. And is the opening line really that bad? It used to open like this should I have kept it like that