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So, I am currently working on a mini-fantasy series, and I want to use D20 to determine how well my characters would fare when they are escaping from a strong monster, or fighting against a bandit ambush while escorting a carriage etc. Would this system work, or inconsistency of dice make the...

Hello, I currently write a battle academy book, and I need feedback on the fight scene in Chapter 1: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/794596-generic-battle-academia/chapter/794618/ I want to know if you think the combat flow is smooth or has holes and if my descriptions are decent or bad...

Hello, I am writing a battle-academia/protect Earth from space monsters-type story. I have written several chapters focused on the main character and given details about him and how he entered the academy, but I need advice for introducing other team members. A small detail: Mc doesn't meet with...

Hello, I am looking for a story similar to the pacific rim with alien monsters invading Earth, but with the addition of super-powered individuals. If you have any recommendations, be it on this site, a hardcover novel, or yours, I will be glad to add them to my reading list.

So some time ago, I stopped my main series and began a rewrite because I felt something was wrong. But after two months of writing. I have some concerns. My writing got better, at least grammar-wise, but my story got boring, at least for me., I cannot feel the same excitement as before...

Not for a story, not for writing. I am just curious, since both the color green and red is used (mostly red) for healing potions, but between two, which one you prefer.

I am not sure if here is the supposed part for this question but what is that, why some of my views are coming from out of no where.

Hello everyone and anyone, a fellow writer here. I want to write a Battle Academy novel, but I tried before and failed, like oh my God, I don't even want to remember it. Then I decided that I should look for guides and tips about writing one, but as you can guess, that didn't work. I...

Hello dear writers and readers, I have a question in my mind. How can I make gunpowder weapons not too powerful in a medieval setting without completely butchering the immersion? And I am not talking about the first musket rifles that took so long between shoots enemy can make itself an omelet...

For me, one of the most exciting parts of a story (if it isn't a no combat book) is weapons. Especially the weapons that I can consider as most or one of the most powerful ones. Because of that, I want to learn what my fellow writers created as their ultimate weapons. (If you don't write or...

What if we could add a small icon at the end of sentences we want, and when the reader clicks that icon, he/she can hear the sound effect added by the author. For example: Arthur shouted with rage. "It is over. You cannot escape from me this time." Arthur pointed a weapon towards the masked...

In my story, Mc tamed a wyvern after a fight, but as I wanted to give a name to the wyvern, I remembered that I suck at giving pet names. For extra detail: Wyvern's scales are a mix of dark green and brown, and he is not very big (around five meters from head to tail.) Wyvern is dumber than a...

I am currently working on a story with lots of combat in it, and these scenes change a lot as characters use different combat methods. From magic to exosuits, to good old-fashioned guns. Currently, I am struggling to write these combat scenes as I am a novice writer and I almost have no...

I am a novice writer who is trying to understand how to most effectively express the world I created to dear readers who spend their time reading my story. Because of that glossary seems like the thing I needed. I can just write about new characters, items, creatures, etc. So when I add...