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  1. OokamiKasumi

    litrpg tips from someone who hates litrg (unhinged rambling)

    I laughed so hard! -- Mainly because I agree with every single point you made.
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    I'd like to ask your opinion...

    Alright. My apologies for being rude as well.
  3. OokamiKasumi

    I'd like to ask your opinion...

    Actually it is. I'm asking about an author's readership; Hans.Trondheim's readership. Or rather, I was teasing Hans.Trondheim about their readership. Turns out, his readers are middle-school to early high school kids. There is only One reason for short chapters on web novel sites: Posting...
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    I'd like to ask your opinion...

    Yup, I did. Thanks for catching that. There was a goalpost? What are you saying? The entire post is about Authors and choosing whether or not they want to cut chapters into tiny 1000k bits. My take is that 1000k is too small for a chapter, especially for those who read for pleasure, and yours...
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    I'd like to ask your opinion...

    Not True. -- Readers learn from every book they read -- as do writers. For example, because so many Translated stories are being cut down into 1000k chapters to rush posting, readers are learning to accept this as a Norm. Sadly, writers are picking up this trend too -- which is Why your post...
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    I'd like to ask your opinion...

    Quick reading on public transport, or during a break between classes is an Excuse -- not a Reason. I'm from the era before web-novels existed. I had no problem reading paperbacks on the bus, the train, and during class. Popping in a bookmark then opening the book where I left off is easy and...
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    I'd like to ask your opinion...

    Your readers can't digest 4000 to 6000 words chapters in one sitting? -- What are they? Middle-school kids? If they don't have the patience to read longer chapters, they're probably not old enough to be on this site, and shouldn't be reading your stuff to begin with. NO. Chopping full sized...
  8. OokamiKasumi

    Writing When is it too much or too little words?

    Thank you! Are you serious? I can't stand watching those because they're too short. It's like eating a cookie or one potato chip when I want a meal. BTW, the average TV commercial is longer than a TicTok video! Not true. It's just that "violence, sex, and fluff drugs" seems to be the only...
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    Writing When is it too much or too little words?

    Sadly, that is very, very true. The problem with this is, keeping the Readers' interest long enough to get to the next chapter, then the next, and the next -- until the story is Complete. Think: How much story can you tell in 1500 words, seriously? Can you make that chapter so fascinating...
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    Writing When is it too much or too little words?

    Some of the stories on sites like RR also make you pay per chapter. Shorter chapters = More Money per story. On almost every pay-per-chapter story I've read, it's painfully obvious that most of those chapters were originally Longer and clearly Cut then posted piece by piece. As far as I see...
  11. OokamiKasumi

    Writing When is it too much or too little words?

    For published novels, 2500 to 3000 is the preferred length, according to my editor. For POSTED Online Chapters, I personally prefer longer chapters; 3000 to 5000 words, simply because there is a time lag between chapters. In the period of time between chapters; a week, a month, years, most...
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    Writing Cause then effect or effect then cause?

    Your Journalistic/Essay/Report writing is showing: The mans eyes snapped open (effect) as the brick was thrown through his window (cause). When writing an Essay, or reading a Report in the News, What Happened is the first thing that gets mentioned because What Happened is the most Important...
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    Writing Environment Description

    Here: [Tutorial] Tricks to Tight 'Sneaky' DESCRIPTION Specifically: Scenery Every new scene should open with a snapshot of description that details the stage the action is about to happen in. No more than 60 words max. If you need more than that to describe your setting, splice it into your...
  14. OokamiKasumi

    Exactly! -- When you have a character that can end the world, how do you end their story? It's...

    Exactly! -- When you have a character that can end the world, how do you end their story? It's not like they can settle down and farm! -- Getting married is also out of the question. Seriously, would you try to sleep with someone that can shatter your bones if they hug you too tightly? Not me!
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    I find battle-manga type stories Boring. It's too easy to guess the plot. Once I can guess the...

    I find battle-manga type stories Boring. It's too easy to guess the plot. Once I can guess the plot, the story is over for me. I prefer twists and surprises in my stories. I am not so easily entertained as a high-schooler. (I left high-school a loooong time ago.)
  16. OokamiKasumi

    As for I Was a Sword When I Reincarnated (WN) (translation), I'm going to have to agree with...

    As for I Was a Sword When I Reincarnated (WN) (translation), I'm going to have to agree with you. It looks like the author wanted to go somewhere with the story, but their Publisher or Agent talked them out of it -- and into writing a battle manga type story.
  17. OokamiKasumi

    Both Bog Standard Isekai and The Runesmith have good strong plots, excellent characterization...

    Both Bog Standard Isekai and The Runesmith have good strong plots, excellent characterization and a healthy dose of Description. You can tell that these authors know how to write a good story!
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    Allow me to consult my reading list... -- Bog Standard Isekai -- I Was a Sword When I...

    Allow me to consult my reading list... -- Bog Standard Isekai -- I Was a Sword When I Reincarnated (WN) (translation) -- The Runesmith
  19. OokamiKasumi

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    Believe me IT SHOWS. It is a published series -- a children's book series meant for middle-school boys translated from Japanese, a language that doesn't have adjectives at the middle-school level of that language. (You know, the words needed for description?) There's also a manga series, and...
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