do you like fantasy novels? and coupled with romance?

[Misako]

do you like fantasy novels? and coupled with romance?

I know that there are too many genres like this on the market, but what is certain is that there are very few or almost no stories about a main character falling in love with a little girl.

maybe in the real world, an incident like this will be directly handled by an FBI agent for violating the law on the protection of minors

But what would the world be without FBI Agents?

The love between the main character and an 800 year old little girl

Maybe it will be a little interesting to some, and maybe not to some

But from a person's point of view, love is blind, being able to fall in love with the young, old or simple is a happiness that everyone deserves.

So here I present the story between the Main Character who falls in love with the 800 year old Little Fox Girl

With a mix of action, fantasy and romance

Will they be able to live happily?

Find their story in "The Greatest Swordsman"

and find a happy ending for them

 

[tiaf]

You mean all the loli stories out there?

 

[T.K._Paradox]

do you like fantasy novels? and coupled with romance?

I know that there are too many genres like this on the market, but what is certain is that there are very few or almost no stories about a main character falling in love with a little girl.

maybe in the real world, an incident like this will be directly handled by an FBI agent for violating the law on the protection of minors

But what would the world be without FBI Agents?

The love between the main character and an 800 year old little girl

Maybe it will be a little interesting to some, and maybe not to some

But from a person's point of view, love is blind, being able to fall in love with the young, old or simple is a happiness that everyone deserves.

So here I present the story between the Main Character who falls in love with the 800 year old Little Fox Girl

With a mix of action, fantasy and romance

Will they be able to live happily?

Find their story in "The Greatest Swordsman"

and find a happy ending for them

Bruh.

 

[Gryphon]

do you like fantasy novels? and coupled with romance?

I know that there are too many genres like this on the market, but what is certain is that there are very few or almost no stories about a main character falling in love with a little girl.

maybe in the real world, an incident like this will be directly handled by an FBI agent for violating the law on the protection of minors

But what would the world be without FBI Agents?

The love between the main character and an 800 year old little girl

Maybe it will be a little interesting to some, and maybe not to some

But from a person's point of view, love is blind, being able to fall in love with the young, old or simple is a happiness that everyone deserves.

So here I present the story between the Main Character who falls in love with the 800 year old Little Fox Girl

With a mix of action, fantasy and romance

Will they be able to live happily?

Find their story in "The Greatest Swordsman"

and find a happy ending for them

Is this bait. Am I about to receive a knock at my door. I'm sorry for liking eromanga sensei! Does that make it better?

 

[Deeprotsorcerer]

I know that there are too many genres like this on the market, but what is certain is that there are very few or almost no stories about a main character falling in love with a little girl.

Unless you're trying to be funny, you're blatantly wrong here. Like, wrong since before Lolita. Like, wrong since before The Bible, during an age where Greek/Roman mentors of a higher class were notorious for abusing their underage apprentices, and thus created ripples in the literature of that time.

But from a person's point of view, love is blind, being able to fall in love with the young, old or simple is a happiness that everyone deserves.

So here I present the story between the Main Character who falls in love with the 800 year old Little Fox Girl

Morally, no. Ethically, hell no. A 30 year old doesn't "deserve" to be in a romantic relationship with anyone below the age of majority, below a certain age (culture and upbringing does have an effect on this, but that's not a subject I'm about to touch) the psychology, but more importantly, the power imbalance, makes any such relationship objectionable.

There's another thing to be said about the body types and mental age, however. I vaguely recall a case where a man was accused of holding (demonetization bait redacted!) getting set free after a porn star with dwarfism proved that he just had her material and was a huge enough fan to get physical copies.

That being said, the "800 year old loli" trope has been used and abused to put child-coded characters in situations where they simply do not belong ala Dragon Maid. If you make the fox act, talk, and make decisions that reflect her real age, then sure, The Greatest Swordsman may get a pass, even if people wouldn't be wrong in thinking it's more than a little squicky. Not too many people bat an eye at you for marrying a lalafell in FF14, after all.

I will read your work. Standby and await judgement.

 

[Kitsura]

Pretty sure I don't read anything else.

 

[K5Rakitan]

Fun fact: My ex-boyfriend (2009-2014) was 39 years older than me. I picked him up from Craigslist when I was 19. He was verbally/emotionally abusive and hid his meth habit from me for five years. The fun part was the swinging. Through that experience, I found out about polyamory and realized that's what I really wanted, but my sense of loyalty kept me with my ex longer than I should have been. I don't think it was wasted time, though. I learned a lot through that experience, and my husband was my friend with benefits through most of it, so I really didn't miss out on much.

I wouldn't say that age alone is a reason to avoid dating someone, but I've had my fill of age gap romance IRL.

 

[BubbleC]

But from a person's point of view, love is blind, being able to fall in love with the young, old or simple is a happiness that everyone deserves.

No.

 

[T.K._Paradox]

Unless you're trying to be funny, you're blatantly wrong here. Like, wrong since before Lolita. Like, wrong since before The Bible, during an age where Greek/Roman mentors of a higher class were notorious for abusing their underage apprentices, and thus created ripples in the literature of that time.


Morally, no. Ethically, hell no. A 30 year old doesn't "deserve" to be in a romantic relationship with anyone below the age of majority, below a certain age (culture and upbringing does have an effect on this, but that's not a subject I'm about to touch) the psychology, but more importantly, the power imbalance, makes any such relationship objectionable.

There's another thing to be said about the body types and mental age, however. I vaguely recall a case where a man was accused of holding (demonetization bait redacted!) getting set free after a porn star with dwarfism proved that he just had her material and was a huge enough fan to get physical copies.

That being said, the "800 year old loli" trope has been used and abused to put child-coded characters in situations where they simply do not belong ala Dragon Maid. If you make the fox act, talk, and make decisions that reflect her real age, then sure, The Greatest Swordsman may get a pass, even if people wouldn't be wrong in thinking it's more than a little squicky. Not too many people bat an eye at you for marrying a lalafell in FF14, after all.

I will read your work. Standby and await judgement.

I really hope this story is not some twisted fantasy. There are a lot of off putting things about this story's sales pitch.

 

[Varstark]

Quite a bit of fanfare you've got going on here. 800 year old fox loli must be something astronomically special to get a (I assume) grown man to fall in love with her romantically, because that amount of neoteny does a terrific job of warding off romantic feelings.

In a world where something like Jobless Reincarnation (and many other Japanese manganime) was animated, aired and sold, I doubt you need to send out a feeler to see what people will think about your story. Just publish it. So long as it doesn't go too off the rails and attract the mods attention, no one but a couple of trolls or diehard moralists will give a shit, and you'll get your little safe place on the internet where you can live out your fantasies without actually harming IRL minors.

 

[BenJepheneT]

The Greatest Swordsman

Shinji is the greatest Swordsman in the land of ShenLuo, His strength managed to conquer all the formidable opponents and made him the strongest in the land Once upon a time, Shinji had to face all the Swordsmen on the mainland of ShenLuo He managed to kill half of them...

www.scribblehub.com

it be real

 

[Misako]

Please note, that the story that I made is a work of fiction, not a reality, just a work of fiction, a work of fiction, not a reality, I could have made a character where he could kill 90 thousand gods just by clapping his hands, even in a story that I present it, it is a fiction, an essay and just a method of entertainment for the reader, why is it taken seriously? this is just a work of fiction, again, this is just a work of fiction, just for entertainment, so there is no need to respond if you really can't appreciate someone's work
I say again, THIS IS JUST A WORK OF FICTION, IF YOU CAN'T DIFFERENCE BETWEEN REALITY AND FICTION, YOU SHOULD STAY AWAY

 

[Deeprotsorcerer]

Please note, that the story that I made is a work of fiction, not a reality, just a work of fiction, a work of fiction, not a reality, I could have made a character where he could kill 90 thousand gods just by clapping his hands, even in a story that I present it, it is a fiction, an essay and just a method of entertainment for the reader, why is it taken seriously? this is just a work of fiction, again, this is just a work of fiction, just for entertainment, so there is no need to respond if you really can't appreciate someone's work
I say again, THIS IS JUST A WORK OF FICTION, IF YOU CAN'T DIFFERENCE BETWEEN REALITY AND FICTION, YOU SHOULD STAY AWAY

Never said I couldn't appreciate a piece of fiction. In fact, even objectionable fiction can have its own merits. The Monogatari series has great writing and art direction, but features problematic elements and Made in Abyss' world building is nothing short of masterful, but the author posted pinups of Prushka in the official material of the webcomic.

I enjoy these works, but at the same time, the way they handle certain themes is nothing less than gross in my opinion, and they could have either approached them with more maturity, or pivoted so that the squick wouldn't be there at all. Because these works (and yours) are publicly available, however, I'm free to put my bony hands all over them and rattle my teeth about my impressions for good or ill. Anyone who understands what it's like to have a bigoted uncle that you love will know that the cognitive dissonance of liking some parts of a piece while objecting to other parts isn't all that difficult to square.

"Don't Like, Don't Read", is a childish maxim, and the sooner you get over it, the faster you will grow as an author. Do know, however, that my criticism/opinion of your work isn't a personal attack, I'm just interacting with it.

I read your first chapter, most certainly not the worst I've read, but I've left you a comment with my gripes. Thanks for being a writer, and I really mean this from the bottom of my heart: don't let anything I say push you to quit. Writing is hard and the only way to get better is to stumble your way there.

 

[Varstark]

Came back to post because I wanted to apologise. Didn't mean to come off as antagonising on my first post. Sorry about that.

Reasons why we're not particularly supportive of your story: people are oversaturated on the thousand year old loli and FBI jokes, your post sounds like an attempt to excuse your story from the inevitable cries of paedophilia (kneejerk reaction on our part and poorly written on your part), and an undercurrent of lack of honesty about the subject matter at hand where you seem to be feeling the full brunt of shamefully writing a brazen fantasy about an adult romancing an eight hundred year old loli foxgirl.

What I mean to say is that everyone knows it's a fantasy, so you don't have to try and convince us. Even if it's a controversial subject, realise that most people on this side of the internet will know and treat it as mere art and fantasy - have you seen the kind of stories most of the writers here put out? Branching off the first reason, what probably put a derisive smile on most of the people reading your post is your need to cover for your story despite, well, actually writing it and posting it in the first place.

Don't. The moment you try and make excuses for what you went to the efforts to create, no matter how badly written or trashy it may be, is the moment people will feel cheated, and the ones who haven't read it will expect that your story itself will be as emotionally paradoxical as your advertisement. If the author of Twilight or Sword Art Online or Boku no Pico or Jobless Reincarnation had done the same, their fans would be just as disappointed.

Hell, if you opened up with "I fucking love eight hundred year old foxgirl loli-grandmas and I will make you love it too", then people would've just snorted and the disinterested or disgusted would've simply passed over it coolly or with a smarmy quip or two. Just, uhh, don't do it anywhere else.

People joke about virgins and chads, but it's not really a joke.

 

[SakeVision]

Never said I couldn't appreciate a piece of fiction. In fact, even objectionable fiction can have its own merits. The Monogatari series has great writing and art direction, but features problematic elements and Made in Abyss' world building is nothing short of masterful, but the author posted pinups of Prushka in the official material of the webcomic.

The virgin world-building versus the chad loliguroporn! The future is now, old man!

Get ready to see Faputa sniffing Reg's dick, twice, and Riko doing a nice sssssnifff at Fapu's privates fully animated and in color!

 

[Deeprotsorcerer]

The virgin world-building versus the chad loliguroporn! The future is now, old man!

Get ready to see Faputa sniffing Reg's dick, twice, and Riko doing a nice sssssnifff at Fapu's privates fully animated and in color!

You are not the only one cursed with knowledge. Have you seen the dude's Twitter page?

If there was an upside down smiley reaction emojii, I'd abuse the hell out of it.

 

[SakeVision]

You are not the only one cursed with knowledge. Have you seen the dude's Twitter page?

If there was an upside down smiley reaction emojii, I'd abuse the hell out of it.

of course, I follow tsukk, I'm a FAN

 

[Deeprotsorcerer]

of course, I follow tsukk, I'm a FAN

Kweh.