Not many chapters so far, but most are of decent length. What's your prediction?
The Third Young Master of Liu has always had a recurring problem with jade beauties... they just keep throwing themselves at him! Oh, the absolute horror! Then, one day, in front of a mirror, the final boss appeared. The ultimate jade beauty to end all jade beauties approaches...
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To be honest, I don't find the premise to be very appealing, but you have the two most popular tags on SH, so it'll work one way or another. As for the prose, there are occasionally redundant phrases like "whispered almost inaudibly" and "violently pushed". Everything else is fine.
200-500 readers by Chapter 30.
Oooh what do you think of this one? I personally dont think itll be super popular 'cause its a bit niche-
*UPDATES EVERY MONDAY AND FRIDAY, SOMETIMES MORE IF I DON'T HAVE SCHOOLWORK. **This is tagged as comedy but I have a really stupid and peculiar sense of humor so yeah. * * 'That's an eldritch horror.' 'No it's not, it's a frog.' 'Why does it have ten eyes and eight...
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The premise isn't niche; only really bland, judging from the synopsis. The story needs to have more interesting qualities than just a boy exploring the fantasy world. The writing is nice; I can't complain.
Less than 150 readers by Chapter 30.
Only one chapter at the moment, still would appreciate your thoughts though.
A starless sky lit by clouds, plants of every colour, and a once dead old man astounded by it all. Meeting an entity that he was too stupid to believe or comprehend, having his very soul tampered with, then waking up in a relatively tiny body that was very different...
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This seems very promising. There's one major problem, though: the title. Even "Reincarnated as a Fairy" might be a better title and that's a low effort title that I come up within 10 seconds after writing this feedback -- you can think one better than me. Then, add "Gender Bender" tag, and you'll get hundreds of readers. The first chapter is interesting; I like the system for having a fun personality unlike the usual.
100-300 readers by Chapter 30, if nothing's changed.
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I don't know but lets just try for curiosity am i rite?
Yet another Gender Bender story to review. Not that I'm complaining, I'm just mildly surprised.
Anyway, it's a rather traditional take of GB story. There's no problem with it except a very minor nitpick. Your story doesn't have Girls Love tag (which is completely fine if you don't want to add romance), yet the cover implies there will be a harem in the future? I find it weird, but whatever. Great first chapter, by the way.
300-700 readers by Chapter 30.
After infiltrating a shady corporation to find out information about her missing sister, Yomogi is captured and strapped onto a machine that tampers with her mind through the magic of gradient descent. Will she be able to resist and save her sister? Light-hearted edutainment where I sprinkle in...
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Would really appreciate any thoughts from people.
Can't review your story; it's already deleted.
