T.K._Paradox
Was Divided By Zero: Looking for Glovebox Jesus
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Well shit, live reading?
Gotta push out more chapters now.
Gotta push out more chapters now.
Here: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/619639/reincarnated-as-poseidon-in-gow/I'm starting a feedback thread as you probably read in the title. Whatever stories are submitted, I may read on Youtube so that the author may gain more traction and because it could be fun. The rules are simple.
1. Any story is allowed so long as it's on ScribbleHub. (I will not go to links on RR, Webnovel, Ritoria, Wattpad, or others)
2. Any story you offer up for feedback can qualify for a live reading each Sunday.
3. I will only read the first 3 chapters (If you think I should read more "because the plot doesn't set in until later," then you should probably work on that first)
4. You must post the link or I won't click on it (signatures do not work all the time for me)
5. Take my feedback with a grain of salt as it is only my opinion.
Rating system:
Grammar, rated from 1 - 5
Spelling, rated 1 - 5
Plot, rated 1 - 5
characterization, rated 1 - 5
Enjoyment, rated 1 - 5 (this is based on personal opinion)
The total points will be added up and divided by five to decide the total star rating. Any story with a rating higher than 3/5 will qualify for me to read and act out each Sunday. One story will be rated each business day on this thread so don't submit the same story repeatedly. I will get to you when I can. I will do my best not to be harsh, but to instead give positive feedback with brute honesty. Anyways, have fun.
Ooh! Ooh! Me! Please!!! Me!!! Please!!!I'm starting a feedback thread as you probably read in the title. Whatever stories are submitted, I may read on Youtube so that the author may gain more traction and because it could be fun. The rules are simple.
1. Any story is allowed so long as it's on ScribbleHub. (I will not go to links on RR, Webnovel, Ritoria, Wattpad, or others)
2. Any story you offer up for feedback can qualify for a live reading each Sunday.
3. I will only read the first 3 chapters (If you think I should read more "because the plot doesn't set in until later," then you should probably work on that first)
4. You must post the link or I won't click on it (signatures do not work all the time for me)
5. Take my feedback with a grain of salt as it is only my opinion.
Rating system:
Grammar, rated from 1 - 5
Spelling, rated 1 - 5
Plot, rated 1 - 5
characterization, rated 1 - 5
Enjoyment, rated 1 - 5 (this is based on personal opinion)
The total points will be added up and divided by five to decide the total star rating. Any story with a rating higher than 3/5 will qualify for me to read and act out each Sunday. One story will be rated each business day on this thread so don't submit the same story repeatedly. I will get to you when I can. I will do my best not to be harsh, but to instead give positive feedback with brute honesty. Anyways, have fun.
Just let me know. Send the link and I'll add it.Ooh! Ooh! Me! Please!!! Me!!! Please!!!
Edit: I’m on my phone… I can’t post a link… I don’t know how…
I’ll do it later this evening.
It's up to you. Take your time.Oh my, I'm kinda interested, but at the same time too shy to make the jump.
I added the link!Just let me know. Send the link and I'll add it.
Rating system:
Rating system:Appreciate the effort. First time I have almost got close to finishing the first volume of my novel.
Some critiques would really be appreciated.
St Chaos Healer
Here's my novel. The pacing has been a bit slow but I try to introduce the readers to the new world as our mc adapts.
Really appreciate taking the time to do this.
Rating system:This is so cool! I didn't know you had a youtube channel! Good luck with that! You could link it so I can follow.
I'll leave the link to my story below, however, I already got excellent feedback from Envy and Prince Azmiran, so I don't mind if you skip my story in favor of others who haven't received feedback yet.
Link:
Nowhere to Run
Nina is a young priestess that just started her journey in the Highlands, in a faraway land. But everything falls apart when greater forces are scheming and unknown men are suddenly after her. She will have no choice but to resort to her wits, trust unexpected allies, and navigate her...www.scribblehub.com
Thank you so much for your honest thoughts.Rating system:
Grammar, rated 2
Spelling, rated 4
Plot, rated 3
characterization, rated 2
Enjoyment, rated 3
2.8 / 5
The story is great with good characters and an interesting start to the plotline. Worldbuilding is plentiful but not forced down your throat or in a wall of text, but naturally a part of the story itself. Your grammar could use some work as there were a lot of run-on sentences and sentences that were near impossible to read aloud as they didn’t make sense. Spelling was pretty good with only a few mistakes here and there. As for the plot, it’s good but I don’t know much about it. The hook in the prologue makes you want to read further though so that’s good. The main characters feel very real but a lot of the side characters or unimportant characters (IE the northman, with the exception of the youngest) feel as though they have no real personalities. I enjoyed it and would recommend it to others but probably wouldn’t keep reading it due to personal preference.