Most common ones are from superhero genre i.e., Batman, Ironman, Punisher, Black Panther, etc. They're technically powerless amid people with abilities. For more of weak and normal characters, you can read more examples here.
Mmm kinda. At the end of the day, someone like Ironman or Batman is fantastical. A lot of it has to do with framing, but the reader knows that being Batman or Ironman is impossible. Same for Black Panther.
Thank you, apologies for the late response. Such info is what I expected but don't fret, I just like to see how someone reads it this way. Spoiling early surprise though... Maybe I might do that should I actually be done with the story first. I can see that reader count be slow as well but also something I don't really worry about since I take my time with writing it all out to begin with.
There's a little problem here. It could be said that I'm addicted to chuunibyou and I want to put it everywhere. I mean, it's not that bad, but I just want one of the main characters in that novel to be a chuunibyou. I don't think it's a horrible idea either way, she's not even the protagonist. I have not read the novel you mentioned, so I'm not sure I get the reference, but I don't understand why people think chuunibyou is cringe in general. Take Rikka for example, probably the most popular chuunibyou character out there. For me, she's pure cuteness. Sure, she would be cringy if she were real, but she's only an anime character. That said, I understand why a slice of life/romance novel would try to be realistic, but this novel with supernatural powers isn't really aiming to be the most realistic thing ever.
No, no, no. I absolutely hate this type of jokes and I would never use them in my own novel. The titties are... just for being there, I guess. Personally, I'm not a fan of titties, so I wouldn't mind making all characters flat or just not mentioning chest sizes at all... but that would be kinda empty. I'm not even sure why I mentioned it, it's not like it's important or anything.
I feel that the conversation thread has been resolved already, but I guess I'll drop by for some support, too. Just dropping by to encourage you to push for it if you really like chuunibyou characters. Don't let "cringe" comments stop you if that's what you truly enjoy because at the end of the day, the biggest fan of your work will be you. It may be for others, but if you enjoy it, who cares, really? And while the chuuni is not my favorite archetype, I find it a funny and cute character in general. Must be the Bang Dream or Love Live experience.
Switching between alternate world and reality a.k.a traditional portal fantasy is an outdated trope, unfortunately. The premise is too basic, even with a psychic main character since it's not fresh enough. In addition, the story's half of first chapter is basically a summary of mc's personality and power -- which will bore readers immediately. There are other problems beside that; but if you want to know more, you can visit this thread and ask for feedback. Overall, you'll get less than 100 readers at chapter 30 with very low chance of becoming popular.Hello, I am the author of the novel An unknown world. I am kind of interested in your service for the other authors here, so I would like to send you the link to my novel.
Here is the link:
At first, I thought this is a run-of-the-mill school life story... until I read the slavic names and cozonac bread. The story's setting piqued my interest. Other than that, not so much. The biggest issue is the lack of character introductions within your story (character profiles don't count), so it's hard for me to get attached to them.Hello, I want to know if my stories are good or not because I've started writing last month. Not aiming to be popular or anything though.
Here's the link for the book:
Blood Pact (Being Edited / Under Construction)
Sergei Kravsotvich, a man of unrivaled strength and a master hand to hand combatant enrolls to Nosferatu Academy of Magic to further hone his ability with Blood Magic and combat skills. There he meets, Chigusa Asahina who tells him that he performed the binding ritual of blood or blood pact...www.scribblehub.com
Hey, I've seen this one on trending. I think you may be a little too late for my prediction lol.
Sorry, but I don't give feedback on poems. I just can't differentiate between good or bad ones since I very rarely read them.How about my Lewd Poems collection?
Lewd Poems
Do bodily functions amuse you? Are you intrigued by reproductive organs? Does simply being a placental mammal tickle you? If you answered yes to any of the above questions, this book is for you! This is a collection of lewd poems from various authors. My husband either inspired me or...
I'm quite surprised that it is an outdated trope, well I guess I could understand what you mean by that. But if you were to say through ‘portals’, it would only be used in a few events of the novel. For other events, he would either suddenly appear in the alternate world or being summoned there for a reason. You will later (maybe) understand it in Chapter 14.
I know right? But I can't change it or else, the story will end up pretty short.
I know that, I have experienced that myself as a reader. But if I were to see from another perspective as an author, it proves to be beneficial for me because it serves as a place for reference so that I will not go off track from the original idea. To be honest, I actually have ever tried to spread it across the entire story. But, in the end, it turned out to be a mess because it doesn't link with each other at all. So I had to change it to that kind of format. As an author, I would like apologize to the readers (and hope that you all can bear it with me as a part of the readers). But it still depends on the readers taste, I guess. As a reader, I'm actually still surprised that there are some people who liked it, but I am still grateful for that. I have no comments for that.
I appreciate your valuable review and thanks for sending the thread. I will ask for more feedback there.
Haha, my main reason was to just ask for a review since I rarely get any review from readers at different webnovel apps. For your information, this is one of the 7 places where I have uploaded my story. Well, I'm not really discouraged by that because I never thought of making a popular novel and I am also not placing any bet on it at all. I'm just letting it ride through the times and will see how it will be.
Here is a list of webnovel apps where you can find my novel and how many chapters are there in each of it:
Hello there, I'm not sure if you're still up for it but here's a little work of mine - link
I sincerely believe that your novel will do well. But never post more than 2 chapters per day!
Ah, about that, I already had all those chapters written on webnovel thats why i did a mass copy-paste on here, there's no way i can even write and edit more than 2 chaps a day in any other case.
Yup, I agree with you that some of the characters just popped outta nowhere and due to the lack of introductions, the reader will be confused. You have a given me an idea on how to progress for the novel, I think i'll create a few chapter that introduces them properly. But, I was thinking about writing character profiles for each of them.
While it's easy to understand what's your story about, I find it not really appealing. There's nothing special about a pacifist protagonist, though it could work as a comedy. But then again, I doubt it will catch readers with just that. You'll get around 100 readers in 30 chapters with very low chance of getting popular.
The premise is okayish -- not too generic but not particulary great either. Mc taking care of sister-like character isn't groundbreaking or anything. Op protagonist is also very standard in cultivation genre. There are no annoying cliches like arrogant young master which would be nice if not for the lack of conflicts in your story... at least for now. I guess that's just my pet peeve lol.
The entire point of this thread is to predict… go to the trinary’s thread if you want feedback.Posted my first story today, just want your opinion(feedback). No need to predict.
Midnight Guard: Tales of Loz
[Disclaimer: Will contain a male/male relationship as a subplot.] Something lurks in the city of Loz. When accursed arcane magic suddenly opened a blasphemous and bizarre portal, Alton knew he had to investigate the culprits of this heresy. He must keep order in Loz. Many from within see Alton...