Nahrenne
Pure and Innocent Maiden~
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Yay!Not bad! It tells the reader what to expect with enough of a question to leave them wanting more, and it has no liabilities that would detract an otherwise-interested reader. It could use a little polish, but I'm sure the same can be said of all of mine.
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*huggles you lots and lots*
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