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    Free bad feedback thread

    Putting my work up for reading… I could go for the review/rating if you want. Also, thanks for doing this: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/764812/ravenswood/
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    Arrogant Young Master's Story Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/764812/ravenswood/ I have placed my story before fake-beard master in hopes that his gaze shall leave the moon and fall upon my work.
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    Looking for Insights? (Closed, Thank you!)

    ooohhhh... 😦 thank you for reading and reviewing, and yes you’re right, the story is still trying to get its footing as am I, I’m currently writing without a beta-reader or an editor, so everything is all on me, no professional second eyes before I release, but I’m hoping to get one down the...
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    Paul's feedback thread

    Alright
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    Paul's feedback thread

    I have an idea... could you add subtitles maybe using a subtitle generator; I think it would make it easier for people watching. No pressure though
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    How fast did it takes you to complete a chapter?

    This is me, not the a month own though, that one is for 2 chapters 🤣
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    Paul's feedback thread

    Oh my! Please let us know when you create the youtube channel, would love to check it out; here’s my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/764812/ravenswood/
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    No, I’m not on a VPN. I can reply to comments under my own story though

    No, I’m not on a VPN. I can reply to comments under my own story though
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    Unus(one for those who don't understand Latin[uneducated people/s]) chapter feedback

    I’d like some feedback on mine if you please 🙂 Ravenswood
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    Get your reviews here. (Full, will reopen soon)

    If you're looking for some medieval fantasy story, then feel free to check mine out: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/764812/ravenswood/
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    Read/rate swaps

    Oh, I checked yours out since you posted the link. I’m not a good reviewer so I didn’t say anything, because I didn’t want to come out and say nonsense, but I did read it and liked it. I tried rating on the site but scribble hub has been giving me issues, heck I can’t even comment. I dunno if...
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    Read/rate swaps

    Thank you for reading, I’m glad you enjoyed it. My writing style was kind of inspired by game of thrones using 3rd pov omniscient, the narrator knows everyone and their thoughts that’s why the names were said regardless of dialogues, but for Jon/Zephyr to use it, he had to have heard through...
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    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    Alright, thanks
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    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    Thank you. And the prologue is connected, far later in the future those characters will be reintroduced. What do you mean by underhanded and dirty with intrigue, and also hazardous for readers? Sorry if I’m asking too much
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    Envy's Free Feedback Thread [Thread Closed]

    Thank you for your time
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