My story is already going for quite a long time so I can't make a heavy revision on the first chapter but getting others' insight is very welcome. Here's the link
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/141721/lord-of-the-ancient-/
So I have a lot of feelings on this one. First off, I love the little conversation at the end between the two "divine" being at the end of the chapter discussing their business. Normally in Isekai stories, there is really no rhyme or reason why the switch happens and its kind of "just go with it" thing. Here though, I really liked the idea you had on principle.
Also, on principle, I thought the start of your story was well done structurally. I like to see a chapter to get to know the character and find out about them and their lives before swapping over. Most of the time, the connection to the MC is the only thing you start with that's interesting so that's good to see.
Now on to the bad. I think this is really a question of prose and execution. Prose is really awkward in some places and doesn't read right. Outside of the word choice and sentence construction, just the WAY you go about telling the story is kind of awkward and off-putting. Especially given the topic about a character being cheated on by his wife. Once again, I think that's a great idea in theory, but you really have to do it right.
So overall, I would say execution of ideas is more important than ideas themselves, and for that reason I wouldn't keep reading.