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Sandycat135
Is my prologue attention grabbing enough?
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4
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449
Sandycat135
Sandycat135
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Review Request: Son of the Spirit Beast
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0
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228
NagatoSaitou
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clover2218
Opinions On The Prologue...
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4
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390
clover2218
clover2218
tale_gunner
The fine balance between plot and sex
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12
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1K
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
Love4NovelGuy
Review Request- Battlefield Restart
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8
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647
Love4NovelGuy
Love4NovelGuy
Mihou
Thoughts and Plot Suggestions for my second novel.
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7
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537
Sloth-of-Bangkok
Sloth-of-Bangkok
Nole786
What do you think???
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446
blazjindanblue
blazjindanblue
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AM I ACTUALLY A BAD WRITER?
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17
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2K
ChronicleCrawler
ChronicleCrawler
ChronicleCrawler
Feedback for my Novel - The Last Dukes' Memoirs
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0
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186
ChronicleCrawler
ChronicleCrawler
DalangTala
Need feedback (Open for feedback exchange)
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0
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187
DalangTala
DalangTala
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New Story Feedback
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0
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192
Matt1plus
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Feedback?
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2
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414
Trippalicous
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Overlord_Venus
Suggest edits for my novel (Synopsis and Chapter 1)
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2
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418
Overlord_Venus
Overlord_Venus
Sandycat135
Feedback on my first chapter please!
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5
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582
Sandycat135
Sandycat135
Puppetboi
Hows my story start
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1
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275
Yiphen
Yiphen
DalangTala
Planning to Revise my Novel, Please give feedback (Title, Synopsis and Ch 1)
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11
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909
Thor
Thor
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This is my very first chapter, need feedback if it’s good
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6
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742
Yiphen
Yiphen
UnderseaMortal
I'm having trouble building the character of the MC, can anyone help?
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12
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1K
LiquidCeil
LiquidCeil
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What can I improve on and man Grammer...
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1
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318
DarkWe
DarkWe
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Should I retrofit my MC to make him lose his memories instead of retain them?
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0
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199
CrystallineSphinx
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